Good day, Pierre.
Many thanks for the work you have put into creating my CV.
99% there, I think.
I have attached the copy with comments and added in blue.
In the overview I prefer to not steer towards XXXXX (unless I am looking to approach a xxxxx firm), so I prefer to be more generic.
Apart from that, and the notes I made, it looks very good.
Thanks also for forwarding over the weekend, much appreciated (my weekend is Friday !)
Regards,