Hi Pierre,
I made a couple of changes (in red)- one I need you to edit the content – you will see my note.
All updates are in red
As I had mentioned, let’s use the key word arrangement that you put together. I like it much better!
Wording is great.
If I added too many words, please see if they fit or we can change them so the content fits correctly.
Thanks again!
Looks great! Yeah! Finally.