Hi Jean,
You did a fabulous job on this resume.
Thank you very much!
I made a few suggestions, though I’m not necessarily set on making them permanent changes. I will defer to you and your expertise on these things.
I appreciate all of the time that you have taken on this, and all of the thought that went into it.
I didn’t feel that I had a lot to include on a resume, but, you have made much of what I thought was mundane work experience, sound more substantive, and of value…thank you for that as well!
I look forward to the final draft and/or any final suggestions you might have.
Thank you!