Greg,
Attached are my edits. Overall, this looks great. I need additional emphasis put upon my business operations experience in addition to my IT experience. I did purchase the text version of the documents. I would also like to purchase the ATS optimized document and have my LinkedIn once we have finalized the resume. I understand there is an additional cost for those services.
Please let me know if you have any questions on the resume comments/edits.
Thank You