October 15, 2018
Hi Greg,
I think what you did looks great!
I don’t really see any inaccuracies or anything I need to change.  I did BOLD the two company names at the bottom (see Track Changes) but if you don’t think it’s a good idea, you can remove. (I did not make any changes to Cover Letter).
Also, I did order the ATS version.  Is that a different document and would I use both or just submit the ATS version to any job I apply to?

Thanks,

Asad K.