Greg, good afternoon.
Thank you for my updated resume and cover letter.
I thought you did a great job with both conveying my career experiences and core competencies. I had a few edits and corrections on the resume to follow up with you on.
I have attached the draft resume and highlighted the edits and corrections in YELLOW for you. I did not make any other changes to the resume regarding format and or spacing I will leave that to you as you instructed.
Please let me know if you have any questions and or comments regarding the edits and corrections.