By Peter Newfield | April 6, 2017

April 6, 2017

Dear Pierre,

Thank you very much for all your help with my resume.

Appreciate your thoughtful insights and knack to write crisp descriptions.

God bless you.

With best regards,

Jeanie,
Thank you for your work! I genuinely appreciate you lending your talent to my experience.
There is NO WAY I could have done this on my own.
The revised copy is attached for round two. I made changes in blue as I am simply not very good with the track changes function. In some cases, whole sections are blue. Please know that this is NOT because I rewrote them entirely. Rather, I consolidated bullet points and/or re-ordered bullet points.
Joanne McC.

Dan,
This looks good.
I think I’ll need to have another version done to reflect the skills I’ve learned in school as this mainly highlights sales and customer service achievements.
I’m guessing this is common practice, more than one version? I’ve already used this to apply for a management position within my parent company, STERIS.
They emailed me within a couple days of submitting it and I have an initial phone interview scheduled tomorrow afternoon.
I think this effectively speaks to your skills!
Thank you,
Paul R.

Peter
,I have been extremely busy and unable to call rgarding doing an email campaign.
My wife and I are going on vacation July 10 and return July 27. Lets talk then as I would like to get busy on the search when I return.
I am very pleased with the resume and cover letter Rosie wrote!
Best Regards,
Paul F.

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