April 6, 2017

Hi Tammy,

This looks great!

I think you higlight my achievements very well and a very concise way, definitely very pleased.

I have made a couple minor changes in red. I do want to add one career highlight but not sure how to frame it well. Since I am looking for both small to medium size company CFO roles as well as VP finance in companies, I want to add a highligh that point out my strengthy in business partnership or financial managment… I have throw in some thoughts in the revised draft, hope you can help me out on that.

Much appreciated!.

I am also interested to have you help me with a cover letter.

Maggie Y.