I an ecstatic how this came out! It would never have been as powerful if I had written it myself.
A few proposed edits and questions included within the attached document.
I am surprised submitting resumes in PDF format is no longer appropriate. I thought this was standard practice, or at least it used to be. Do you suggest protecting the Word document is any way to maintain its integrity?
I would also like to have a cover letter written. Do you write that as well?