Now we’re talking!! 🙂
It looks much, much better and much more robust!
I only have a couple of tweaks
I would like you to make: please see notes on the document attached.
I think we’re finally there!
Will you make revisions to the cover letter as well?
At the very least I would like you to include the header with my name and address in the cover letter as well if possible.
Thank you so much for all your help!