April 6, 2017

Greg –

Thank you for sending me my re-written resume. I have attached the resume with a few corrections. Otherwise it looks great.

I do not have any changes for the cover letter.

My only general comment to add is that I am looking in my next job to have more of a “thinkers” position instead of a “doers” position and I wonder if a few words up front about my innovative and created solutions to complex problems should be more highlighted (along with the tactical results you have clearly outlined)?

Thank you again Greg!

Lynne R.