By Peter Newfield Posted April 6, 2017 In 2017-04-062017-04-06/wp-content/uploads/2017/03/logo-main.pngCareer Resumes/wp-content/uploads/2017/03/logo-main.png200px200px 0 0 Hello Greg, Thanks for the revision, and I think we have a winner. I’ve made some final edits (added ‘Officer’ to my military line, removed an errant comma). Feel free to wave me off the word changes if you had a specific purpose in mind. I appreciate your help and am looking forward to giving the resume a trial run. If you had any specific insights or advice regarding my resume, I’d appreciate the feedback. Otherwise, thanks again for a job well done and I am off to hunt for that senior IT position. Joel H. April 6, 2017 Recent PostsAdult Gap Year: What You Need to Know about a Sabbatical5 Interview Questions Women Should Ask HRRecovering from Interview MistakesShould I still apply if I don’t meet all the job qualifications?