By Peter Newfield | April 6, 2017

April 6, 2017

Greg,

I’ve attached my suggested modifications with Track Changes.

Thanks for great job!

Steve C.

Thanks Wendy ,
Wow!
Most impressive, excellent writing. I will work on this today.
Marni M.

Ilona:
I get it: the top paragraph is to be adjusted according to the specific gig’s requirements. Will the rest of the resume’s format stay intact?
One more question: when responding electronically, is it recommended to send the resume as part of an e mail, or as an attachment ?
Any other comments, input, or questions? Am I ready to rock? OK, so that was two more questions.
Again, thanks for all your good work – well done. It is appreciated.
Be well,
Jack C.

Peter,
I have reduced my concerns to a single complaint: I am not a good one to toot my own horn. Try resolving this when I tell you that I own two
pipe organs, probably over 1,000 horns!
The cover letter and resume done by Sherri Morgan seem powerful. They capture my achievements and do so without exaggeration. I can identify my current and past efforts in the documents. So, well done.
I passed some minor suggestions back to Sherri and I would like to move forward.
One item we spoke of was a bio for obtaining director positions. I would like to explore others.
Craig S.

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