Hi Kathy,

Thank you – this looks fantastic – amazing how you make me sound. I definately see the huge benefit in having this done by a professional writer.

Attached are the edits I have on the resume. As I read this, I realized that there are a couple of things that are missing – namely my experience with the SAP ERP system and my expertise in Excel – now it may be a given, which is why these are not spelled out – so I thought I would just bring that up.

Would that be something to include in the experience high lights? I have added these in on the attached, but would like your opinion as to if they should stay or not

Thank you,
Mark R.