April 6, 2017


Glad to hear you are getting over your cold.

I have attached a document (version ‘b’) with a couple of highlighted areas to get your opinion on a few areas. I’m not adamant about the changes – – and really want to bounce them off you to get your thoughts (the changes are highlighted in yellow with a parenthetical explanation next to it).

Overall, this looks really great. I am generally impressed with the looks of this. …

I would like the opportunity to look over your changes one more time and sleep on it a day or two before we finalize hopefully in a day or two.


Patrick J.