April 6, 2017


Thank you for the resume proof. I think it looks really good, but I had a few tweaks in mind. One thematic shift, and then a few minor points.

It would be good if it talked to solution architecture / my being a senior architect more. It does that well, but I’m thinking just a minor shift in focus from management/sales to architecture.

Of course, feel free to get in touch if you have any questions about these, or if you want to offer alternative suggestions.

Also, the cover letter looks great!

Thanks for that too!


Brian L.