By Peter Newfield Posted April 6, 2017 In 2017-04-062017-04-06/wp-content/uploads/2017/03/logo-main.pngCareer Resumes/wp-content/uploads/2017/03/logo-main.png200px200px 0 0 Hi, Greg, This version looks really good and I like it a lot. I would like the following modifications made, and then we can proceed: Cover letter – The application in PRO is an existing app so I took out the word “new”, and changed “design” to “enhance”. Resume – A couple of my own suggested changes for the resume seemed a bit too technical and narrow, so I either took it out, or modified them with a broader expression. I appreciate your help. Thanks, Angela H. April 6, 2017 Recent PostsAdult Gap Year: What You Need to Know about a Sabbatical5 Interview Questions Women Should Ask HRRecovering from Interview MistakesShould I still apply if I don’t meet all the job qualifications?