April 6, 2017


I was pleased with the first draft of my resume. I turned on the tracker function in Word. Please see the minor changes.

In my current role, there are three directors over the application area because of the number of facilities and staff. As far as the number of staff I supervise and applications supported, that is correct. I did remove the word “all” in the cover letter.

I’m a non-voting / resource on the IS Steering. Is the word “active” member of IS Steering too strong?

As a project manager, the physicians didn’t work for me. We made recommendations and consulted them.

I made some minor changes on page 2.

I had several people review this and they thought it sounded good.

Randy J.