Greg,

I have reviewed your first drafts of my resume and cover letter. I think that you did a very good job, considering what I gave you.

All of my changes and corrections are in red, with the exception of some extra spaces that I inserted between words, to improve legibility (I always do this in documents that I create), within my name and parts of my address, as well as in the company names, locations, and most of the job titles. Words or letters that should be deleted are indicated with a strikethrough.

Again, thank you.

Larry S.