Let me start by saying THANK YOU – my resume looks fantastic.
Let me also apologize for not getting back in touch with you earlier, but my life took a turn for seriously crazy and I needed to find enough time to review your work with the attention it deserves.
Attached, please find a few suggestions for updates and clarifications. The biggest one is bullet three of the “Principal Engineer” block. This was a huge project that started with a simple request for analysis of data and ended up with saving the client a lot of money. I would like to emphasize that I did everything from development of the concept to system integration, coding and introduction to production.
Anyways, again thank you so much for all your hard work and I am looking to receiving an updated version at your earliest convenience.