April 6, 2017

Hi, Wendy,

Thank you for your good work.

I can see your revision is more effective in presenting me in front of the hiring manager.

I took a bit time to read the draft and made some corrections(in red) along with my answers to your questions highlighted in yellow.

It would be good if we can talk if you still have questions. Meanwhile I will replace my initial resume with this first draft even though the final draft is not ready yet.

Since it is better than my original resume and I had one recruiter browsed my resume, I figure I have nothing to lose by using even the draft.

Best Regards,

See Y.