By Peter Newfield | April 6, 2017

April 6, 2017

Gregory,

I’ve attached a copy of the resume you sent. My changes are in read, with a synopsis at the end. Please review.

Mostly a truly outstanding effort on your part.

Regards,

Tracy L.

Merry Christmas Tom,
Opening your documents was like a kid at Christmas for me-and I was over-joyed with what I found.
You did a great job, exactly what I had hoped for.
Great verbiage and peppered with some unique and compelling words that have never occurred to me.
You did an excellent job in compiling my history into a living document. I felt good upon completion of my homework assignment and once I read your first draft, I felt that it definitely focuses on my expertise and most importantly, my potential to make an impact in my next position.
I am most comfortable with 3 pages as there is solid info there, no fluff stuff.
I think I am most impressed with the top two boxes on page one. If this doesn’t knock their sox off, they ain’t looking?
Thank you, Thank you, Thank you for a job well-done.
Hope you and yours have a wonderful Christmas.
Hal C.

Dear Jeanie,
Thanks for the first draft, I like it.
You have done a great job. Thanks again.
According to your request I have made the necessary corrections with blue (and a larger font size).
Please provide me with the next version.
Thanks.
Have a nice day!
Gabor T.

Ilona,
I just wanted to thank you for the EXTREME MAKEOVER that you gave my resume!!!!!!!
The minute I posted your resume, the calls just began pouring in like crazy. I could tell when I read the verbiage on the resume that it was going to be effective, but I had no idea it would be this soon that I would begin seeing results! It was only 2 weeks ago when you did my resume and I have already interviewed with SEVERAL Fortune 500 companies including CNN, Georgia-Pacific, and Beazer Homes.
I was extended an offer from Georgia-Pacific for a position as Executive Assistant to the Vice President of Human Resources, starting at $51k…almost a $10,000 increase from the pay at my previous employer! I have accepted the offer, but I still have hiring decisions pending for CNN and Beazer Homes! Every since you did my resume, I have been having an interview everyday! You are “the BOMB”, (for lack of a better choice of words)!!! You are truly knowledgeable about the Executive Support industry and it shows through your articulate usage of industry buzz words and carefully selected verbiage. This was truly the best $xxx I have ever spent!
Sincerely,
Bridgett B.

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