Thank you so much for all of the apparent hard work that you’ve put in to my resume.
It truly looks amazing and I’m excited about going out into the job market with it. First of all, I’ve made some comments on the side of the document. I hate working via e-mail because you can never gauge tone.
You truly have a talent that is jaw dropping in my opinion. Any comments that I have are not to be taken negatively in any way, they’re just my way of trying to figure things out.
I’m also attaching a copy of a resume that I created while waiting for your resume to come through. Obviously it is not any where near the level of professional quality that you’ve sent to me but it might help to make things a little clearer for you.
Again, thank you so much for this resume. I feel that we are very very close and with a few minor tweaks it will be better than any resume I have ever sent out in my life.