I’ve reviewed your latest effort thoroughly making several small edits and I’m quite pleased with the results.
I’ve also had several peers review the document and their response has been favorable. That said, I’m going to run with this version and begin the job hunt in earnest Monday.
You’ve done a fine job of blending my past experience with newly acquired skills in an effective and succinct style that captures my new direction and ambitions.
I’m confident that your work will open a few doors for me and make the next career step an easy one.