After hearing that you were assigned to this makeover and reading your blogs I knew I was lucky to be working with you!
What a terrific transformation from what I thought was an OK resume to this, which makes my previous documents look terribly mediocre. Greatly appreciated!
Please see attached, a few comments made in red. I made a number of small adjustments myself in places to exactly describe responsibilities on the Resume but did not turn on change tracking. The only items I’m requesting your input on are in red, and if you would be able to read it through once more (you’ll notice my changes) and confirm that would be great.
We’re just about done.