April 6, 2017

Hi Freddie,

I apologize for the delay. I’ve been swamped at work.

I thought this draft was far superior to the first.

I am suggesting just a few minor changes.

One question I have. Is the “Additional Experience” section an acceptable format? This is obviously a new resume model for me so I was just wondering if employers expect to have those positions stand on their on own.

Thank you for all your time and hard work.

Haskell B.