April 6, 2017

Hello Jeanie

First and above all, I think you did great and my resume looks a lot better and ‘down to the point’ than it used to be … therefore thanks for your excellent work.

In order to get quickly to the final version I have inserted some comments in your draft (please refer to the attached marked-up version).

Please have a look and do not hesitate to get back to me!

Cheers,

Christophe P.