Hi Dan,

You did a wonderful job incorporating my comments in the revised resume!

I added a few modifications and would really appreciate your feedback. Unfortunately I did not turn track changes on, but if you have time to quickly look it over and let me know if I did anything blatantly wrong or broke any rules.

Once again thanks for your help. You really made a difference on my resume. Now it looks very professional and at a director level!

Best Regards,

Rebecca O’D.