April 6, 2017


Thank you for your work! I genuinely appreciate you lending your talent to my experience.

There is NO WAY I could have done this on my own.

The revised copy is attached for round two. I made changes in blue as I am simply not very good with the track changes function. In some cases, whole sections are blue. Please know that this is NOT because I rewrote them entirely. Rather, I consolidated bullet points and/or re-ordered bullet points.

Joanne McC.