Thanks for the draft which really impressed me.
You accomplished a very interesting work on my resume. I put on yellow the modifications I noticed to be done.
Feel free to apply what you think is the most appropriate to have the best chance to put the resume on the right stack at the headhunter.
One more time, sorry about my nervousness on my last mail. After reading, the draft resume I received today, it erased totally my nervousness.
To be honest I am very impatient to find a new position related with my new knowledge, of course, in your so beautiful country.