By Peter Newfield | April 6, 2017

April 6, 2017

Hi Ilona,

Thanks for all of your help. I think my resume look great!

All the best!

Cheryl M.

Hello Peter,
How are you.
Never let it be said that I will not admit when I am wrong.
I wanted to let you know that I have gotten some very positive feedback from the resume that Christine produced for me. I guess I dont know a good resume until it bites me in the …. anyway.
I would like to discuss with you how to get the maximum exposure for this new and improved marketing document.
When can we we talk about the networks that you have referred to?
Let me know what works for you.
Jeff S.

Greg,
I was pleased with the first draft of my resume. I turned on the tracker function in Word. Please see the minor changes.
In my current role, there are three directors over the application area because of the number of facilities and staff. As far as the number of staff I supervise and applications supported, that is correct. I did remove the word “all” in the cover letter.
I’m a non-voting / resource on the IS Steering. Is the word “active” member of IS Steering too strong?
As a project manager, the physicians didn’t work for me. We made recommendations and consulted them.
I made some minor changes on page 2.
I had several people review this and they thought it sounded good.
Randy J.

Greg,
Good news. I have Microsoft Word on my laptop. I was able to open up the file. Sorry for the confusion. BY THE WAY, IT LOOKS AWESOME… I love it.
Rolan S.

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