April 6, 2017

Hi Ilona

Finally I had some time to review and make changes to the document you created. I have been tied up with our annual sales meeting for the past several weeks and finally had some time to breathe.

I think you did a fantastic job consolidating the breadth of information I provided. I gave some feedback in redline format in the attached document. Of course, you’re the expert, so I ask that you review and remove anything that you see as extraneous.

I would very much like for you to incorporate the testimonials in a cover letter. And would also like you to provide the “language” for marketing ladders that Peter mentioned could also be used on Linked-In.

So I imagine the format you provided is well received amongst people recruiting marketing folks?

Looking forward to working to finalization with you!

Kristen M.