By Peter Newfield | April 6, 2017

April 6, 2017

Hi Ilona

Finally I had some time to review and make changes to the document you created. I have been tied up with our annual sales meeting for the past several weeks and finally had some time to breathe.

I think you did a fantastic job consolidating the breadth of information I provided. I gave some feedback in redline format in the attached document. Of course, you’re the expert, so I ask that you review and remove anything that you see as extraneous.

I would very much like for you to incorporate the testimonials in a cover letter. And would also like you to provide the “language” for marketing ladders that Peter mentioned could also be used on Linked-In.

So I imagine the format you provided is well received amongst people recruiting marketing folks?

Looking forward to working to finalization with you!

Kristen M.

As far as Joanne, I am extremely pleased and happy with Joanne’s (Career-Resumes) work. The resulting resume (and cover letter) is clearly far beyond a mere cleaning up of the old version. My own work efforts with Joanne took close to 3-4 days between information and editing etc., but it has been a very informative, enlightening and productive experience for me. I am also far better prepared now for interviews as a result of the ‘information’ package provided by Joanne. First time I’ve ever consolidated everything together like this. Going forward, Career-Resumes are permanently in charge of ‘my’ resume.
Thank You.
Peter W.

Kelley,
Just wanted to thank you for your writing skills and hard work on my behalf. I knew that I interview well but I haven’t seen some of the higher end opportunities, which I think was due to my resume.
Your version of my resume helped get the interviews for some of the better opportunities, during which I was able to sell the whole package.
I start my new position as VP – Internal Audit with an outstanding offer that’s 50%+ over my previous base salary.
Thanks for all your help and I will be in touch in the future to update my resume if you are still willing.
All the best for the future and I hope you don’t mind if I pass along your name to others that may be interested.
PRJ

Donna,
I just wanted to drop you this tremendous note of THANKS! I faxed (imagine without fancy letterhead) 4 resumes to advertised positions in my newspaper today at 9am……… At 1:00 pm I recieved a cell phone call from a title agency that was impressed with my resume, credentials and business experience. I have an interview tomorrow with the manager who is looking for a person with my qualifications and enthusiasm. I appreciate your professional attention to the details of my resume and also your helpful insights as to projecting myself with confidence regarding my education and past business skills.
The cover letter was excellent and most definately got the attention of the manager to further review my resume.
THANK YOU.
Sincerely,
Cindy A.

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