By Peter Newfield | April 6, 2017

April 6, 2017

Hi Rosie,

The resume looks great!!

I’m currently working on editing it and I should
be finished in a couple of days.

Thanks,

Mohammed A.

Jean
This was an excellent first draft and you certainly made the most of the info I provided. I made revisions (not many) and feel very comfortable with what you’ve provided. Your positioning statement at the outset takes the focus away from the fact I’ve worked in one industry for almost 20 years – I could have never pulled this off myself!
Please review my marked up copy and thanks again – you’ve given me a whole new outlook on my possibilities !
Charlotte A.

Hi Jeanie!
Thank you for your quick response to my inquiry.
I received the draft and after a quick scan, I thought it was very good. I will be taking a closer look at it today and get back with you over the weekend with respect to any questions I may have and we can discuss on Monday.
Have a great weekend and thank you again for your diligent efforts.
Best,
Dave B.

Hi Wendy,
Thanks very much for the quick turnaround. There are just three more changes I’d suggest (please see attached document).
Other than those minor corrections, I’m very happy with the result and am anxious to send it out into the wild.
Despite my original caution about hiring a professional resume writer, I’m now firmly convinced it was the right move.
William D.

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