I made some edits to the 1st draft & re-attached. You did a really nice job & overall I’m very happy with it!
These edits should tighten it up & answer some of your questions. Let me know if you need further clarification on anything. Also, with it being in tracking mode, it ran over 2 pages, so you’ll have to adjust so it fits back on 2
Let me know if you need further clarification on anything.
I’ll assume the next draft will come over e-mail again?