Wow, you did a great job. I love it. 🙂
The word “client” being in there was for clarification, but, I see now that it defines that in the second sentence. No problem.
Just one question? Initially, I intended for the “product management” to follow “bottom-line contributions”, not follow it, but, maybe it reads better the way you did it. What is your expert opinion?
Aside from that it is fantastic and now opens and prints on 2 pages.
Please just let me know your thoughts on the above question.