I did ask a few others in the ‘business’ and there are various comments but also a general theme. One woman put this succinctly:
‘Whoever wrote this did an outstanding job’, she asked if I had gotten any interviews with it, and I said no, I had not sent it out, she went on to tell me that she thinks I will, easily, with this resume.
I think she represents what I am hearing about your work
PS: She does not know who you are, but she is your competitor. She had every reason to criticize the work. I think that pretty much sums it up – You did do an outstanding job