April 6, 2017

Dan,

This is an excellent piece of work. Thank you.

I have a few minor larifications/questions/suggested changes that I’d like your input on.

Attached is the resume with my markup; hopefully the “track changes” function will work and you’ll be able to see the changes I’ve proposed.

What are your thoughts on the recommended wording changes as marked in the document? Do they contribute to getting the message across to the reader?

Again, thanks.

The resume is a significant improvement over what I sent you. I hope the market feels the same way.

Best regards,

William R. N.