April 6, 2017

Dan –

I am extremely pleased with the revisions you have made. The draft you did comes much closer to what I would expect it to be. I have reviewed the draft and made some notations in blue. I addition I have filled out the client form and hopefully offered some additional detail that will make the resume even better. Please review and let me know if you need further clarifications via email or a discussion. Thank you for your excellent work on the draft.

Alison S.