April 6, 2017

Hi Jeanie:

Attached is your draft of my resume that includes my comments. I just named it versions 1.0 so that I won’t confuse documents. I think it is a great improvement. In fact, I found a job on Monster.com this morning that I think is a perfect match for my background and skills.

I would greatly appreciate it if you could edit my opening summary to focus on this position.

Again, thanks for the great work. Hopefully, it will help me secure an interview for this position.

Mary Ann M.