By Peter Newfield | April 6, 2017

April 6, 2017

Lynn,

This is excellent!

Yes, please write me a cover letter as well. I only made 2-3 minor changes and highlighted them in yellow.

Outstanding work…. Thank you.

Randy L.

Hi, Wendy,
Thank you for your good work.
I can see your revision is more effective in presenting me in front of the hiring manager.
I took a bit time to read the draft and made some corrections(in red) along with my answers to your questions highlighted in yellow.
It would be good if we can talk if you still have questions. Meanwhile I will replace my initial resume with this first draft even though the final draft is not ready yet.
Since it is better than my original resume and I had one recruiter browsed my resume, I figure I have nothing to lose by using even the draft.
Best Regards,
See Y.

Dear Jeanie,
Thank you very much for the excellent documents. Really a good work!
Cheers,
Markku M.

Hi Wendy,
Attached are my track changes to your highlighted questions.
I didn’t find anything I wanted to change because it is written right on the sweet spot. Much better than anything I had before on my old resume.
As for proofing I went over it twice and didn’t find anything that caught my attention.
I am excited to see it formatted once it is complete as well as the cover letter. Please let me know if anything needs further clarification as well as when I will expect to receive the finalized resume with my cover letter.
Thank you,
Salma T.

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