Cover Letter Sample Four – General

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Hi Ilona, The cover letter looks nice. Thank you. I am a bit worried that I do not have all the computer skills that many of the marketing jobs require. Do you think that it would it be beneficial to add a line about my ability to quickly learn new software? Also, I am relocating to Jersey in May, possibly March if a job opportunity opens. Should that be stated in my cover letter? Thanks again. I’m pleased and excited about my new resume and cover letter. Sincerely, April I.

Ilona,
I like it and think that you did a great job on it. There are a few changes I listed in Red.
Thanks for your hard work.
Sandy P.

Ilona,
This is really good – much better than I even expected. In fact, I’m pretty blown away! So, thank you so much !!
I went through – and made some minor changes, here and there — but, I noticed that the tense in some of the paragraphs was in the present — and, this may be a mistake on my part – perhaps these are the words that the spider program(s) look for when sifting through thousands of resumes. If so – please adjust back accordingly. You are expert – I am not.
Also, recognizing the fact that we are trying to keep it to two pages – I honestly don’t know what to cut out. It is all factual, and very reflective of my responsibilities. If, it has to go to 3 pages, I left some notes on what perhaps I can fill it with — or if you think it’s overkill, we can list references, or leave blank – again, please interject – I am cool with whatever.
Again, thank you ! I am floored !!!
Take care,
Lorie T.

Cover Letter Sample Four – General

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