Hi Greg,
It looks great. I did have to make one minor change, which is noted in track changes, otherwise I think it looks really good.
I’ll want to proof read it again, and have another 3rd party (wife) proof read it as well. I didn’t make any changes in the cover letter. I think it’s good as is, but again I’ll want my wife to proof read it as well.
Take a look at the change I made in the resume and let me know if you have any questions.
Thank you,
