Hi Greg,
Thank you for sending me my resume draft. I tried to follow all of your instructions to avoid any delays in the editing process. I have noted changes in red. I did have a question regarding the 2nd through 5th bullets under XXXX company. The first bullet is correct stating that I facilitated the process for the conversion. The remaining bullets based on how I’m reading it make it sound like I was the one who did the actual work – I really helped to facilitate the process to ensure that the results that you noted in the bullets were achieved. If I am reading it incorrectly, let me know that as well. I just want to be sure I don’t misrepresent anything on my resume.
Appreciate your hard work on my resume. This is so much better than anything I could have put together.
