Hi, Greg,
Nice work!
I made a few comments and a few edits. Naturally, I’m interested in your professional opinion on what is best.
From a market perspective, my defense experience and system background is relevant for that industry. With 22 years there as an officer and a sailor, I don’t want to give that much detail but I’d like to have enough ‘hooks’ there for them to ask me for the details. Might that be best done in a cover letter?
Thanks,
