Jean,
GREAT job on this !! I am very, very impressed with the quality of the work.
This is fantastic. I think that you did a great job of turning the CV into a shorter work.
I have made a few crrections of facts; and am sending back to you for one last look.
Is there anything else that you would recommend adding? deleting?
If you can let me know about this, then I will appreciate it.
Also, after you get this back to me with any final changes, I will be ready to go to the next step.
Probably for this, I will be contacting Jane again–though it may take me a few days this week to get back to you all; I am quite busy M and Tu.
Thanks again,