Hi Greg,
You really did an excellent job re-writing my resume and cover letter.
I am very happy with your format and content. It provides a lot more clarity and power than my previous resume and cover letter.
Please find attached my edits to the resume and cover letter. Most of the changes are simply to make things a bit more accurate to my situation. However, I am very open to feedback, and please let me know if you think any of my changes water down the message too much.
Best Regards,
