Hi Greg,
I have made a couple of modifications highlighted in yellow including adding a close parenthesis to the following statement. Otherwise, I think the resume looks very good.
* (only 3 months, sold, design, and implemented solutions for state, local & education (SLED) government agencies).
Let me know what you think about my suggested modifications. If good, lets move to final version.
Thanks again & thanks for the below grammar lesson. Learn something new every day.
Regards,
