Good Afternoon, Pierre,
Overall, this looks good.
This process is interesting – the resume reads so much better.
After review, there are some minor changes I would like to make but it appears that I can save and enable editing to make those changes on my own.
Please advise if there is a different process we should follow.
Also, I would like to discuss the additional services available. LinkedIn info as well as working with/identifying recruiters, etc. that may assist me in connecting with a position that I may otherwise not come across on the traditional job boards/online career listings.
Regards,